Oh, I loved it! And a cliffhanger!? Time is Running Out is awesome. Going from the end backwards, I loved the ministories. I liked the two with Agatha and Saunders especially. I found the story of Agatha in Chip and Icarus' bed really, really cute for some reason. I like Agatha. I want to learn more about Dean's actual thoughts about Chip and Icarus' relationship. We've only seen his emotions so far. I actually know barely anything about the Supernatural universe, but your stories seem to stand on their own as far as I can tell. The cut from Chip and Icarus in bed to Kezef torturing an angel? Thoroughly jarring and -perfect-. I like Crowley. He's a familiar character from Good Omens, and I just overall like the idea that demons on earth would seem a lot more comfortable and human than angels would. I like the small snippets of side characters that we see living out all the different possible lives in the apocalypse. I like Crowley, again. And his dog. I like how he seems to be thoroughly accepting of being hated and mistrusted without hating in return, but he also manages to work with Icarus and the humans without much trouble--he is a very adaptable demon. I wonder if you'll bring back the female demon with the creepy smile again--being exploded by Kezef only slowed her down, so maybe getting a knife through her chest won't do much more. The sexual tension is very well written. I like how Icarus listened to Agatha, and that she still talks to him as long as he pretends to be asleep, now that she knows he can hear. ...And that's all the way to the beginning. Long story short, I like your book very much. It sounds like you plan to write more, what with the cliffhanger at the end, and I will make sure to read it if you do!
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Time is Running Out is awesome. Going from the end backwards, I loved the ministories. I liked the two with Agatha and Saunders especially. I found the story of Agatha in Chip and Icarus' bed really, really cute for some reason. I like Agatha.
I want to learn more about Dean's actual thoughts about Chip and Icarus' relationship. We've only seen his emotions so far. I actually know barely anything about the Supernatural universe, but your stories seem to stand on their own as far as I can tell.
The cut from Chip and Icarus in bed to Kezef torturing an angel? Thoroughly jarring and -perfect-.
I like Crowley. He's a familiar character from Good Omens, and I just overall like the idea that demons on earth would seem a lot more comfortable and human than angels would.
I like the small snippets of side characters that we see living out all the different possible lives in the apocalypse.
I like Crowley, again. And his dog. I like how he seems to be thoroughly accepting of being hated and mistrusted without hating in return, but he also manages to work with Icarus and the humans without much trouble--he is a very adaptable demon.
I wonder if you'll bring back the female demon with the creepy smile again--being exploded by Kezef only slowed her down, so maybe getting a knife through her chest won't do much more.
The sexual tension is very well written.
I like how Icarus listened to Agatha, and that she still talks to him as long as he pretends to be asleep, now that she knows he can hear.
...And that's all the way to the beginning. Long story short, I like your book very much. It sounds like you plan to write more, what with the cliffhanger at the end, and I will make sure to read it if you do!