2007-04-22

sickle_stories: (Default)
2007-04-22 11:39 pm
Entry tags:

Poem, or Chapter Prompts.

It's got some good bits, though the first few lines may need a bit (or a lot) of tweaking. Particularly order-wise, I think.

Fine, thank you, and how are you?
They look confused.
As I awake, an answer.
Who are you today?
A perplexing question.
I know when I awake.
Then after that first cup I change.
Don’t we all.
Give me a moment to think.
They ask again: how are you today?

Variation: Attempt 1 )
sickle_stories: (Original)
2007-04-22 11:39 pm
Entry tags:

Poem, or Chapter Prompts.

It's got some good bits, though the first few lines may need a bit (or a lot) of tweaking. Particularly order-wise, I think.

Fine, thank you, and how are you?
They look confused.
As I awake, an answer.
Who are you today?
A perplexing question.
I know when I awake.
Then after that first cup I change.
Don’t we all.
Give me a moment to think.
They ask again: how are you today?

Variation: Attempt 1 )